Another practice piece, What critique do you have this poem?

What lake are you fishing on? Arctic char or brown trout? I'm in for a hearty breakfast. Most ice fishing I've seen is done sitting, unless a spear is involved. I like the shape of your poem, but there are lines that could use a bit of work. Sympathise is a place where I differ in spelling, but that's a dialect variance. S2 L1 is awkward, but then so is thinking at that temperature.